Friday, 29 June 2018

WALHT write an explanation

WALHT write an explanation


Success Criteria
Self Assessment
I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)

I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)

I will have an conclusion
(I will end with a personal statement or interesting fact)

How a circuit works


Have you ever wonder that small particles go through electricity and it sets the
electricity to work every day?


Well this writing is to tell you about things that goes through electricity.


It even makes people's job easy cause it makes the computers work and so they
don't need to write in books.

We use technology cause sometimes it's helpful. A simple circuit has a battery,
wires and a lightbulb and if you know how to make one then you should try to
invent something that includes knowledge and learning. The electrons move
through the wires from the negative end of the battery towards the positive end.

1 comment:

  1. hi i'm Eyziyah i like the way you but in interesting facts

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